tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1598482777681428179.post6430750800142323154..comments2023-08-08T05:02:50.109-04:00Comments on Tonja's Musings: S is for Show Don't TellTonjahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08652479946102909276noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1598482777681428179.post-82435876481739499302011-04-22T15:44:47.879-04:002011-04-22T15:44:47.879-04:00Interesting poem. :-)
I think it's a shortene...Interesting poem. :-)<br /><br />I think it's a shortened form of some long-winded writing rule or something. <br /><br />But yeah, I word it differently when I crit people. <br /><br />:-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1598482777681428179.post-8725090364148411692011-04-22T11:06:37.535-04:002011-04-22T11:06:37.535-04:00Thanks. :) Too harsh for the public readaround? ...Thanks. :) Too harsh for the public readaround? Just kidding - I wouldn't dare risk hurting anyone's feelings. <br /><br />I think a better motto would be "Sometimes...(with a pause)...less is more. Maybe less here. But only if that's what you're going for."Tonjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08652479946102909276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1598482777681428179.post-72363505502279025652011-04-22T08:39:39.153-04:002011-04-22T08:39:39.153-04:00Great poem, Tonja. I especially love the first st...Great poem, Tonja. I especially love the first stanza.<br /><br />I also think it's awesome that even when feeling "stuck," you do amazing writing. <br /><br />Have a nice weekend!Augusthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05327497007604732176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1598482777681428179.post-51058939586418464112011-04-22T08:34:35.128-04:002011-04-22T08:34:35.128-04:00'my insurgent spirit' - that phrase will ...'my insurgent spirit' - that phrase will linger for me.Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09229539600930298413noreply@blogger.com